Improving Writing 3: Mentoring Improvement in Writing

An extended conversation to improve writing standards between a first grade pupil and his teaching assistant.

She sits with him asking "may I take a look at your writing"? The pupils challenged to use a newly taught skill, vivid verbs. She gives feedback which is recorded on a card. Finally we hear the story being read to the class. The class teacher picks up on the new skill being used well. Includes Joaquim who also features in other first grade clips.